Reading your lean stories and your lank poetry makes me want to drop everything and charge outside to change the air filter on my 82 Mustang. Listening to you tonight inspires me to repaint the patio furniture, go fishing with a down-and-out friend, write seven poems about something I stopped seeing a long time ago, or describe a waterfall to a blind man.
Reenter the real world, as youd say. Do some truth-telling.
Thats what I heard you talking about when you talked about love in the rain-loud Paris bookstore back in the summer of 87. Thats what I saw behind that home-from-hell look on your face that late afternoon when you followed your friends Richard Ford and Jonathan Raban to the front of the room and shyly read your poems. Your shyness took me by surprise, though not your wistfulness. You played the crowd like a jazz man, syncopating the moment itself. Fords stories had been stiletto-sharp, especially the one about the guy who saw a bear catch on fire. Raban was coyly ironic when he regaled us about bumping into Paul Theroux in a small village along the coast of Englandwhere their rivalry kept them from divulging anything about their journeys to each other.
But you broke open the game. In your poems you were as clear as a trout stream. You spoke as if love were the only force on earth worth talking about, our only chance to defeat deaths hammerlock on our lives. You read as if the long slow alchemy of your recent life had changed lifes wicked disappointments into something else almost palpablethe possibility of transcendence. You described stupendous changes as the only thing worth writing about. In a room where the tension of literary anticipation had frozen us unnaturally in our seats, calm soon ruled.
Then you read your stories. Your fingers trembled, as if phantomly flicking away ashes from past cigarettes. We were there with you. On your quest for the real lurking behind the phony, in your world of fractured fables, your stories penetrated the darkness. In those bleak tales of characters gazing over their shoulders, the long slow suicides in faceless suburbs, the seedy menace of things in rustbelt factories, the forlorn world of sawmills, truck stops, diners and bars, I heard the warning bells from lifes dangerous railroad crossings. But I also saw hope for loves redemptive touch. I imagined changed expectations about shattered lives. I felt the hearts unruly ways.
Who knows why we do what we do, you humbly reminded me that afternoon, as I listened from the top of the staircase? Who can tell why we carry on after our hearts are splintered? Or why Im sorry are the two hardest damn words to pronounce, and sometimes never make any difference anyway? Or why its agonizing to give up the shot glass on the bedside table?
I heard your words as valentines to the utterly lost, messages in a bottle to places where passion was lying low, but lurking just fine behind the FOR SAIL signs advertising old boats on the curbs in front of boarded-up laundromats in the drizzly northwest. I heard an ardent belief in the possibility of epiphany for the emotionally collapsed out there on the asphalt roads of America. I heard that poems and stories should stretch us, as when the inconsolable grief of the unfound dream is finally surrendered, and forgiveness and love begins to thrum in the heart, that there is always a chance for momentary redemption.
These were moments that got past my defenses.
Get in, get out. Dont linger, you recommended to a young Danish traveler that evening who asked for a little advice. Endow things with immense, startling power, you said to another earnest poet, then gently reminded her of the necessary fire, for a story with lasting power. Poke through the ordinary details of life, you urged to a note-taking professor from the Sorbonne, the worthwhile details of life to be found in the ashes of our lives. We must convince the reader that our characters have seen things, as you said softly, with stop-breath sweetness, and the Paris rain purled down the window glass. Thats the soul of the story, you said, quoting Chekhov, your voice ringing with laughter and surprising me with your choice of the old touchstone word.
Thats what I heard that night, from my perch next to the bookshelves featuring International Fiction, along with the accents from a United Nations of readers, and the steady pinging of rain on the Paris rooftops. The bookstore was jammed with backpackers, scholars, even waiters from nearby cafés. All of us listening intently to your wordmusic, as Tess would say later on, words that revealed your perfect pitch in the soul and spirit department. Plain and simple music that expressed your forgiveness of the worlds wicked disappointments.
To the last question, the one all true writers disdain, about the purpose, if any, of stories was, you replied, Stories are something glimpsed only for the
Then your voice trailing off at the end, drowned out by thunder.
Eight years later, Im reading you again. By the time I finish your story about the blind man describing a cathedral Im feeling cleaved in half. A long-buried question slowly emerges, the one at the end of your reading that night at the Village Voice. As if it were yesterday, I recall how we all strained to hear your answer through the guttering rain. I go frenetically searching through my undermemory of yellowing notebooks and journals, piled and stacked in the basement. Finally, in an old French blue grid notepad marked 1987, I find, at the bottom of a coffee-mottled page, the jumbled half-answer. But the last word is indecipherable. Flabbergasted, I squint, shift the notebook under a bright light.
Music? magic? nuance? numinous?
I cant make it out. I feel like a fool.
Whats the word, Ray? What were we supposed to glimpse? Whats the last word on stories?
I read the sentence out loud again: Stories are something glimpsed only for the I reread it for the rhythms, the lunge forward into hidden meaning. I close my eyes and recall that afternoon with its exquisite melody of coffee aroma, pastry smells, and the burbling sound of rain on cobblestone that pervaded the room. I visualize the wolf-like gaze Ford cast toward you, and the owlish wisdom that danced across Rabans face. Moments that reenter the skin.
Then, as if foaming to the surface from a deep river, a word comes to me: marvel. I check it against the scribble on the notebook.
Somehow it fits: Stories are something glimpsed only for the marvel.
The sentence clicks in, the idea makes its way home, as if along the new path to the waterfall, that you described that evening, as if in a dream we were all dreaming together on our last night on earth.
September, 1989August 1997
Phil Cousineau is a writer, storyteller, teacher, editor, documentary filmmaker, travel leader, and photographer. His life-long fascination with the art, literature, and history of culture has taken him on journeys around the world. He lectures frequently on a wide range of topics from creativity, mythology, and filmto soul, writing, and travel. His books include Once and Future Myths, Riddle Me This, The Art of Pilgrimage, The Soul Aflame, Soul Moments: Marvelous Stories of Synchronicity, and Deadlines: A Rhapsody on a Theme of Famous Last Words. He also edited Joseph Campbell's The Hero's Journey. His screenwriting credits in documentary films, which have won more than twenty-five international awards, include: Ecological Design: Inventing the Future, The Wayfinders: A Pacific Odyssey, The Peyote Road, The Red Road to Sobriety, Your Humble Serpent: The Life of Reuben Snake, Wiping the Tears of Seven Generations, Eritrea: March to Freedom, The Presence of the Goddess, The Hero's Journey: The World of Joseph Campbell, and the 1991 Academy Award-nominated Forever Activists: Stories from the Abraham Lincoln Brigade.
"Carver in Paris" © 2000 by Phil Cousineau
from The Book of Roads,
Sisyphus Press, Berkeley, Ca.
Reprinted with kind permission of the author.
Notes: Ray Carver, American short story writer and poet, lived from 1938-1988. His widow, Tess Gallagher, also a poet, essayist, novelist, and playwright, lives in Port Angeles, Washington.
Richard Ford and Jonathan Raban are also writers.
"Rain" photo by Joanne Warfield